I got the idea for this… whatever you want to call it… after reading about the seven-year-old son of a woman who was threatened after — I forget how, and really it doesn't matter — arousing the indignation of an animal rights group. The story goes that he reached the point where he was hiding by the door with a kitchen knife in case the "animal people" showed up to hurt his mommy.
The first thing that popped into my mind was what an exciting moment in your day it would be to knock on someone's door, have them open it, then glance down and see a tiny tot holding twelve inches of serrated death at what for you is groin height. ("Hi. We're from the Church of Jesus Christ Latter-DAAAAAAHH!!!") But then my thoughts went down a darker path, and I couldn't rest until I had committed them to this form. (You can tell it's a bit dated by the reference to "Butterfly Kisses.")
Anyway, here it is, the darkest and most twisted thing I've ever written. If the ending seems like an imperfect and ambiguous sort of redemption, that's the general idea. (If you don't feel like reading through the whole thing, just imagine a version of this that goes on for 15 to 20 minutes. With dialogue.)
ACCOMPANIMENT
By
Paul Briggs
INT
CLASSROOM - DAY
A second-grade
classroom in a public school, seen
from the front of the room at a height of about four feet. Sunlight is streaming
through the windows on the right-hand side. On the left, one row of
fluorescent
lights overhead is lit, but flickering unpleasantly.
Students
are sitting
quietly, working on a series of math problems.
There is a BOY sitting near the back, in the row next to the windows,
concentrating particularly hard on his work. Like everyone else in the
class,
he is about seven, and there appears to be nothing remarkable about
him, except
for two things: the only four unoccupied seats in the room are the ones
immediately in front of and behind him and the two nearest him in the
next row
over, and there is a TALL, BLACK-CLAD WOMAN looming over his desk. She
is
wearing a black turtleneck, black denim trousers, black rubber gloves,
and
black socks with no shoes, as if she were a cat burglar. Her back is
partly
turned to us. The sound of a man pacing is coming from somewhere behind
the
camera.
A
SMALL BLOND GIRL,
sitting near the front in the second row from the
windows, eyes the boy near the back nervously. (Note: she looks
directly at the
boy, not at the woman standing over him.)
TEACHER'S
VOICE
Ms.
Waters?
The
girl looks up
nervously. From her POV we see the MATH TEACHER, an
authoritative-looking man in his forties, looking down on her.
MATH
TEACHER
If
you
don't stop flirting with that boy I'm going to
make you marry him.
The
girl looks
distinctly embarrassed. The other students
chuckle, but not too loudly -- this is a teacher they respect and fear.
WATERS
I
wasn't
-- I mean -- sorry.
MATH
TEACHER
Get
back
to work.
She
does. The math
teacher begins pacing down between the rows,
surveying his domain.
The
boy near the back
completes the last problem and puts down his
pencil. The name "Tyler Fade" is written in the
top right hand corner. He
reaches into his backpack for another textbook, then
realizes the teacher is now nearly standing over him. (At this point,
the
black-clad woman is no longer there.)
TYLER
Mr. Sadler? Sir?
MR. SADLER
Yes?
TYLER
I finished the
assignment. Can I, uh, may I… uh… I have this
thing I
have to get done before English class…
MR. SADLER
You did all the
problems?
TYLER
Yeah.
MR. SADLER
Well, first of all,
look over them again. Make sure you got the right
answers.
TYLER
Okay.
Mr.
Sadler moves along.
Tyler looks over the work. As he does so, the
FLICKERING FLUORESCENT LIGHT plays over the left side of his face,
slowly
turning into FLASHING RED AND WHITE LIGHTS, such as those of an
ambulance.
Tyler concentrates harder, then, when he is satisfied, takes out his
English
textbook, which has a sheet of notebook paper in it like a bookmark.
He
hears a cough, and
looks up. Mr. Sadler has gone down his row and
partway up the next row, and is looking expectantly at him.
MR. SADLER
Did you check the
answers?
TYLER
Yeah. (tears
math assignment out of his
notebook, hands it to the teacher)
MR. SADLER
Go ahead. (pause)
These better be right.
Mr.
Sadler continues
his survey of his domain. Down another row, he
finds a CREW-CUT BOY scrambling to cover up something on his desk. (In
the
background, the black-clad woman is standing over Tyler's
desk again, but the
camera doesn't focus on her.) The teacher strides over,
pulls it out from under
a book and looks at it. It is a half-finished, rather bad drawing of
somebody
grinning, holding a knife.
MR.
SADLER
(crumpling up drawing)
Mr. Gilbert, would you
like a little more time to finish your
assignment?
(GILBERT
thinks for a
moment - is this a trick? - then nods
nervously.)
Well, I would like a
$500,000-dollar-a-year salary, but neither one of
us is gonna
get what we would like.
(in
a commanding tone)
Now get
to work.
He
marches up to the
front of the room and throws away the crumpled-up
drawing.
At
his desk, Tyler
pores over the English assignment (it's one of
those short stories with the annoying questions at the end) and tries
to think
of something to write. He deliberately does not look up at the
black-clad
woman, and all we can see of her is her legs.
INT
SECOND CLASSROOM -
DAY
Very similar to the
first. Tyler, looking
guilty
as all hell, is hurriedly scribbling the last few words of the last
answer on
that English assignment. He gets up, walks to the front of the class
and
shamefacedly puts it on the teacher's desk, on top of a pile
of other students'
assignments. When we CUT TO the ENGLISH TEACHER, an older woman, she
looks at
him with kindness and, possibly, pity. When we CUT BACK TO Tyler, the
black-clad woman is standing behind him again.
INT
CAFETERIA - DAY
The
other tables are a
bit more crowded than usual, but Tyler has
almost a whole table to himself. He sips at his milk and stares
disconsolately
at his lunch tray.
There
is little to
recommend it. The main course is a brown and white
lump of something, splashed with brown liquid, that
was probably offered up as "shepherd's pie with
gravy." It
is
accompanied by canned succotash, baked beans with ketchup, and a brownie.
Tyler
stares at the
baked beans. The splash of ketchup, vividly red, fills
the screen. For
an instant -- not more than a few frames
-- the image of linoleum covered in blood flashes on the screen.
Tyler
looks up from his
food. The black-clad woman is sitting across
from him, and now, first the first time, we can see her face. She is
perhaps
twenty, and quite pretty, but the expression on her face as she stares
at Tyler
is one of utter, indescribable horror. We only see her for about a
second
before--
BOY'S VOICE
(OC)
Hey, guys, look at
this.
Tyler,
glad of
something else to occupy his attention, gets up from
the table, leaving his lunch behind.
Several
students are
standing around the trash
can
in the middle of the cafeteria. One of them is holding his tray upside
down
over the trash.
BOY
WITH TRAY
See,
they both stick.
And,
indeed, the baked
beans and the shepherd's pie are both holding
firmly to what is now the underside of the tray. As Tyler approaches,
they look
at him nervously and start to edge away.
TYLER
Neat. (awkward
pause) Does anything fall off
if you shake it?
No
longer enjoying this
so much, the boy with the tray shakes it a
little. A glob of shepherd's pie falls off. Tyler walks to
the exit, the
black-clad woman only a step behind him all the way.
EXT
PLAYGROUND - DAY
It's
recess.
All the kids are outside, playing. We see from Tyler's
POV as he walks toward the slide, his shadow before him. (Another,
longer
shadow accompanies his. No prizes for guessing who
it
belongs to.)
The
other students
around the slide run away at his approach, except
for the girl already on the steps, who hurriedly goes up the steps,
slides
down, and then leaves.
Tyler
climbs the steps,
reaches the top and looks around. He sees
several students staring at him, but they hurriedly look away. He also
sees a
rabbit in the verge between the grass and the street. For maybe half a
second,
the image appears on the screen of a few photographs of rabbits and
other
animals being cruelly treated in experiments of some sort. These photos
are
lying on a linoleum floor, and are swallowed in an expanding pool of
blood that
covers the floor.
He
slides down the
slide, lands on his feet and drops forward onto his
hands and knees, bringing himself face to face with the black-clad
woman, who
is lying on the ground face up. The expression on her face is still the
same --
however, it is not completely frozen. She blinks once or twice, her
lips
tremble and she seems to be breathing. Tyler isn't afraid to
see her, but he is
unhappy.
TYLER
Why
couldn't you just leave us alone?
INT
THIRD CLASSROOM -
DAY
A
GIRL is standing at
the front of the classroom.
GIRL
My dad's
name is Donald Abramowitz. He's the manager of a restaurant
just outside of town. And my mom works at a drugstore.
CUT
TO a SECOND GIRL
standing where the first girl stood.
SECOND
GIRL
My mom's
name is Maureen Bass. Right now she's… between
jobs, but she
used to work at Big Al's Pizza before the health people came
and closed it.
CUT
TO a BOY WITH
GLASSES standing there.
BOY
WITH GLASSES
My dad is Professor
Theodore Buber. He teaches art history at the
college. Sometimes he goes around the country lecturing people.
He's really
good at that. And my mom is the assistant head of the county library.
CUT
TO a SECOND BOY
standing there.
SECOND
BOY
My dad's
name is Jeff Cianfrani. He works downtown at Simmons' Tire
& Auto. He gets new tires for people when their old ones wear
out.
CUT TO Tyler standing
there. The black-clad
woman
is standing next to him, but we can't see much of her.
TYLER
Dr. Janice Fade is my
mom. She's a scientist. She looks at diseases
and tries to find the cure. Um… yeah?
In
the classroom, a boy
has raised his hand. It's young Mr. Gilbert,
our artistic friend from Mr. Sadler's math class.
GILBERT
Does she ever, like,
take guinea pigs and put electrodes and stuff on
them?
TYLER
What?
GILBERT
(eagerly)
I heard they take
monkeys and guinea pigs and put electrodes on them,
and then stick them with needles full of poison and stuff, and then
they chop
them up into little pieces and--
TYLER
Mom
doesn't do that! She's trying to help people!
GILBERT
(suddenly nervous)
I
didn't
mean it like that, I just meant--
TEACHER
(getting up from her desk)
That'll be
enough of that. You can sit down now, Tyler. Jason, it's
your turn.
As
Tyler Fade goes back
to his seat (the black-clad woman is
temporarily absent) Jason Gilbert gets up from his. Soon he is standing
at the
front of the room. Tyler gives him a dirty look.
GILBERT
(very nervous)
My name is Travis
Gilbert-- I mean my dad is Travis Gilbert, and he's
a public lawyer with-- I mean he's a lawyer with the
public-- I-- I--
INT
RESTROOM - DAY
Tyler
is washing his
hands, and doing a remarkably thorough job of it,
especially since they don't look dirty.
He
reaches to his face
and touches it. We see his face as he touches
it -- it is covered, and I mean covered,
with blood. CUT TO his face in
the mirror, clean and unbloodied.
Tyler
takes some paper
towels, wets them and scrubs at his face with
them. For a split second we flash on a WOMAN IN A BATHROOM scrubbing
frantically at his face, seen from his POV. He looks at the paper
towels, wet
but without a trace of blood on them. He touches his face again. As he
does so,
we see his face covered with blood again -- his fingers move over his
face, as
if feeling for the warm stickiness his skin is telling him is there --
but when
we CUT TO the mirror, we see his face is clean again. Unfortunately, we
also
see that Guess Who is standing behind him, looking as aghast as ever.
INT
HALLWAY - DAY
Tyler
is walking to
class, alongside a BLOND BOY. Behind him is the
black-clad woman, but we don't see her face.
VOICE
O.C.
Hey!
Tyler!
A
TEN-YEAR-OLD BOY
(probably someone who's been held back a year) is
coming up to him.
TYLER
(less than thrilled)
Hey,
Luther.
Tyler
keeps walking.
Luther keeps up with him.
LUTHER
(eager)
Hey!
What was it like?
TYLER
Oh, no.
LUTHER
I heard there was like
blood all over the kitchen floor.
TYLER (reluctantly)
Yeah.
LUTHER
Was there guts all over everything?
TYLER
No.
LUTHER
How about brains?
MR. SADLER O.C.
Speaking of
brains…
Luther
looks up
guiltily.
MR.
SADLER
Aren't you
supposed to be headed for my class… right now?
Luther
accompanies Mr.
Sadler off.
TYLER (to the blond
boy)
I think I liked him
better when he was taking my lunch money.
INT
FOURTH CLASSROOM -
DAY
This
is an art class.
The light is very bright -- maybe a little too
bright -- and the students are all grouped around little tables. Tyler
and the
blond boy are occupying one table. This is shot from a very low vantage
point
-- in fact, from about the level of the table, so that we
can't see what the
two kids are drawing.
The
ART TEACHER, a
woman not much older than our black-clad friend
(who isn't here right at the moment) approaches their table.
ART
TEACHER
So,
Brian, what have you got?
Brian
(the blond boy)
shows her his completed picture.
ART
TEACHER
Good
job.
She
looks at what Tyler
is drawing, winces and turns away. CLOSEUPS on
Tyler's intent face, and on his right hand, which is
gripping a red crayon and
working feverishly. We still don't see what he's
drawing, but just behind him,
out of focus, are a familiar pair of legs in black denim.
INT
FIRST CLASSROOM -
DAY
The
bell rings. The
room fills with the hubbub of kids only too happy
to get out of school.
Tyler
picks up his
bookbag, puts his book and notebook into it, and
zips it closed. As he zips it, there is a sudden flash on a black body
bag
being zipped closed, with a lifeless, staring eye visible for a split second.
Tyler
is walking past
Mr. Sadler's desk on his way out of the room
when-
MR.
SADLER
Mr.
Fade… Tyler.
TYLER
(stopping)
Yeah?
Tyler
moves forward,
letting the other kids walk past. He's worried
that he's in trouble, of course.
MR. SADLER
(more informal)
How're
you feeling, kid?
TYLER
Okay.
Tyler
is less worried,
but still uneasy -- he's never seen Mr. Sadler
try to be anyone's friend before.
MR.
SADLER
You
know
you're not alone.
And
at this point the
black-clad woman is standing behind him again,
close enough for her knees to brush against him.
TYLER
I
know.
(pause)
I gotta
catch the
bus.
Mr.
Sadler nods, gives
a little gesture of dismissal.
EXT
ROAD - DAY
An
establishing shot of
a school bus going a road through the
countryside.
INT
SCHOOL BUS - DAY
Elementary
school
students are occupying the first eight rows, while
high school students take the rest of the bus. Tyler, not at all to our
surprise, has a seat to himself.
Something
truly
appalling is playing on the radio -- "Butterfly
Kisses," perhaps -- and the high school students react in
disgust.
A
HIGH SCHOOL STUDENT
Hey! Mr. Johnson! Sir!
MR.
JOHNSON, the bus
driver, turns his head a bit.
HIGH
SCHOOL STUDENT
(trying
very hard to be polite)
Could…
you… please…
change…
the station?
General assent from the
others. Mr. Johnson
starts
fiddling with the radio, and the music is replaced by static as he
searches for
another station.
Tyler
is no longer
sitting alone. Unfortunately, the person sitting
next to him is, you guessed it, She-Who-Has-Not-Been-Named. There are
nice loud
blasts of static as we see her face (yes, she still looks like she has
her own
private window on Hell) from his point of view. These fade into the
strident
voice of a
TALK RADIO HOST, some Limbaugh wanna-be with a minor slot at this hour.
(The
camera stays on her all through this.)
TALK
RADIO HOST
-isten,
caller, as far as I'm concerned, they
shoulda let him cut off her head and mount it on his bedroom wall. Oh,
I'm
sorry -- was that too controvers-
At
this point the
rather-slow-in-the-uptake bus driver realizes this
isn't a Top 40 station and goes back to changing the channel
again. More
static, then some music that teenagers might plausibly sit still for.
Speaking
of sitting still, the camera is still on her -- this is one
uncomfortably long
shot -- until…
BRIAN
O.C.
Hey.
Tyler.
Tyler
looks ahead.
Brian is sitting on the seat in front of him,
looking back.
BRIAN
You…
uh…
you want to come on over?
When
we CUT back to
him, the woman is gone.
TYLER
(surprised)
Sure!
EXT
HOUSE ON
RESIDENTIAL STREET - DAY
This
is probably in a
small town. If it's a suburb, it's one with
walkable streets. There is the sound of a video game being played which
continues into the next shot.
INT
HOUSE - DAY
Through
a half-open
doorway we see a couple of boys, older than Tyler
and Brian, playing a video game. Brian and Tyler are in the hall,
watching
through the doorway. Brian looks at Tyler apologetically.
BRIAN
They're
gonna
be hogging the game for a while yet.
Tyler
looks at the
game. It is quite violent. He winces and looks
away.
BRIAN
Want
to
surf the Internet?
TYLER
I'm
thirsty. What have you got to drink?
BRIAN
There's
some limeade in the fridge.
INT
BRIAN'S
KITCHEN - DAY
Tyler
pours himself a
glass of limeade. As he looks at the linoleum,
we again see little flashes of the linoleum of a different kitchen,
sprayed,
splattered and covered with blood. As he puts the pitcher of limeade
back in
the fridge, closes the door and turns to leave, there is the sound of
someone
entering the kitchen from the outside, struggling with an armload of
something.
Tyler
is about to go
back into the hall when there is a WOMAN'S SCREAM
and a CRASH O.C. Shocked,
he turns to see a fortyish
woman (BRIAN'S MOM, presumably) standing by the doorway. She
has just dropped a
full bag of groceries on the floor and is staring at Tyler with a look
of
terror on her face.
Her
scream brings the
other kids running -- Brian, the two
video-game-playing boys and a GIRL of about thirteen. For just a second
everyone just stands there -- Brian's mom recoiling in
horror at one end of the
kitchen, the four kids in a little knot at the other end, Tyler
standing
uncomfortably between them.
GIRL
Mom…
you
are so
embarrassing.
BRIAN
You said I could bring
my friends over.
Brian's
mom
starts to realize she has overreacted, but this doesn't
lessen Tyler's embarrassment.
TYLER
I…
gotta
go.
BRIAN
Don't
go
yet!
TYLER
I'm
sorry, my mom's gonna
be mad at me. (pause)
See you later.
EXT
DOORWAY OF
BRIAN'S HOUSE - DAY
Tyler
leaves, backpack
on his back and embarrassment on his face.
BRIAN
(from inside)
Aw,
Mom,
you see what you did?
EXT
STREET - DAY
Tyler
walks down the
street, walking quickly and occasionally looking
behind him. A car driving down the street slows nearly to a stop. When
Tyler
looks, he sees the people in the car staring at him. The car
accelerates away.
Around
the corner, the
same thing happens with a different car. This
time Tyler, who is now quite annoyed, gives the driver the finger.
Halfway
down the block,
Tyler stops. In front of him is a stretch of
white picket fence, decorated with flowers, cards and photographs. Some
teddy
bears (now rather weather-beaten) and candle-ends in little dishes are
at the
bottom. Standing in front of him at the other end of the fence is the
black-clad woman.
Tyler
stops just short
of a cardboard poster on the fence that says "WE Y U BROOK,"
is signed
by many people and has a photograph of a young woman on it.
It's the same woman
Tyler's been seeing everywhere, but in this one she is
dressed normally and
looks much happier. He turns around, goes up the driveway and climbs
over the
fence.
INT
TYLER'S
HOUSE - DAY
Tyler
opens the front
door, comes in.
WOMAN'S VOICE O.C.
You're
late.
Tyler
turns. Sitting in
a comfortable chair is a concerned-looking
woman in her mid-thirties. A lab coat lies across a nearby sofa. This
is
Tyler's mother, DR. JANICE FADE.
DR. FADE
I
was
worried.
TYLER
Sorry, Mom.
DR. FADE
I
was
about to call the police.
TYLER
I was at
Brian's.
DR.
FADE
Well, that's
all right… but when you get off the bus, I want you to
stop here first before you go anywhere else.
TYLER
(muttering a little)
I hate walking past the
fence. I hate looking at all that stuff.
DR. FADE
I know… but
they only put it there because they miss her. They're not
angry at
you.
TYLER
I know.
She gets up, goes over
to where he is and hunkers down to look him
straight in the eye.
DR. FADE
Nobody's
angry at
you. Do you understand me? Nobody
blames
you.
TYLER
I know.
She goes into the
kitchen, motions for him to follow.
DR. FADE
You must be hungry.
TYLER
I'm not.
They're in
the kitchen at this point. It's a perfectly normal kitchen,
except for one thing -- there is a knife rack mounted to the wall with
no
knives in it. (It will come as no surprise to learn that this is the
same
kitchen whose floor has been seen covered in blood in various
flashbacks.)
DR. FADE
The school called. They
said you didn't eat anything at lunch.
TYLER
Gee, is everybody
watching me?
DR. FADE
Yes. Everyone's
watching you, because everyone cares about you. (pause)
Now then, dinner
won't be ready for another hour or so. How about a
snack?
TYLER (looking away)
I… I
had… something at Brian's.
She hunkers down again,
and gently grasps his head to make him look
her straight in the eye.
DR. FADE
You've never
lied to me before. Don't you start now.
TYLER
Sorry, Mom.
She nods, gets up and
reaches into the fruit basket.
DR. FADE
Have an apple.
She hands him one.
It's a Red Delicious. He takes it, but as he looks
at its vivid red color, there is split-second flash of his own hand
covered in
equally red blood.
TYLER
Can I have one of the
green ones instead?
She
gets a
suit-yourself look on her face, takes the apple, replaces
it with a Golden Delicious and takes a bite out of the red apple
herself, as if
to say that as far as she's concerned, there's
nothing wrong with it.
INT
TYLER'S
BEDROOM - DAY
The
only remarkable
thing about this room is that the upper pane of
the window has been replaced with clear plastic, held in place with
duct tape.
Tyler sits on the bed, eating his apple. The black-clad woman, whom we
now know
as Brook,
is sitting next to him on the bed, but we
can't make out her face in any of these shots.
He
finishes the apple
and tosses it at the wastebasket. It hits the
rim and lands on the floor. Tyler goes over there, reaches down to pick
it up
and suddenly pulls his hand away as if it has been stung. He reaches
over
again, very carefully, and pulls up a tiny shard of glass. He looks at
his hand
and sees a little drop of blood on the tip of his middle finger.
FLASHBACK
- INT BEDROOM
- NIGHT
Tyler
is awakened by
the sound of shattering glass. He looks up. The
upper pane of his window has just been broken. There is broken glass on
his
blanket, and on the floor.
CUT
TO his mother, in
her nightgown, sweeping up the glass with a
broom and dustpan. The light in the room is now on, so she can see what
she's
doing.
DR. FADE
Just hold still,
honey… let Mommy finish… don't try to
get out of bed
until all the little bits have been swept up…
CUT
TO his mother
emptying the dustpan in the trash. A COP is
examining a brick with a note tied to it.
DR. FADE
We've been
getting a few phone calls at work, but I think this is the
first time they've started going after us at home.
CUT
TO Dr. Fade looking
down at Tyler in bed. The cop is gone.
DR. FADE
I'm sorry.
Some people were mad at Mommy and they threw a brick
through the window. I don't even think they knew you were in
here.
INT
BATHROOM - DAY
Tyler
is rinsing his
finger under the sink. For a couple of seconds we
hear the sound of running water and see, from his point of view, his
mother
scrubbing at him with paper towels, removing great quantities of blood.
DR. FADE (VOICE-OVER
-
her lips aren't moving)
Please…
please… I have to clean up my son… I have to
clean him up…
INT
HALLWAY - DAY
Tyler
leaves the
bathroom, a Band-Aid (the little round kind) on his
fingertip. He can hear his mother in the kitchen, talking on the phone.
DR. FADE (O.C.)
For a minute there I
thought you were one of those crazies…
(2-second pause)
No, they
haven't. That's the strange
thing--nobody's heard a peep out
of them
since it happened… Maybe they're just
embarrassed…
INT
KITCHEN - NIGHT
We
see this from
Tyler's POV -- he's standing in the doorway. Dr.
Fade
is on the phone, but the tone of this conversation could not be more
different.
DR. FADE (screaming)
--BUT YOU DON'T CARE,
DO
YOU? ALL THIS CRAP ABOUT THE
ANIMALS IS JUST AN EXCUSE TO SCARE PEOPLE!
WELL, IT'S NOT GOING TO WORK! I'M NOT AFRAID OF
YOU, AND IF YOU DON'T LEAVE ME
ALONE I'M GOING TO CALL THE POLICE!
INT
KITCHEN - NIGHT
The
same as above, but
now Dr. Fade has put down the phone and is
sitting on the kitchen floor, weeping. We still see her from
Tyler's POV, but
now he's standing a lot closer. He reaches out and touches
her shoulder.
TYLER
Don't worry,
Mommy. I'll protect you.
She
smiles at him.
INT
HALLWAY - DAY
Tyler,
restless, walks
down the hallway and into the living room.
DR. FADE (O.C.)
I mean, first the
police go after them, now they've got the FBI on
their case…
INT
LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Tyler
enters the room.
Red and blue police lights, and red and white
ambulance lights, shine through the window and play over his face.
DR. FADE (O.C.,
sounding very distant and echoey)
Even the newspapers
can't make them look good after what happened…
INT
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Tyler
looks at the
front door.
DR. FADE (O.C., back
to normal)
And meanwhile, the
girl's father is threatening to sue them for
everything they've got…
INT
LIVING ROOM - DAY
We
see the front door
from Tyler's POV as he crouches beside it,
holding a kitchen knife. Someone is at the door, knocking.
DR. FADE (O.C.)
IN A MINUTE!
She
comes running.
DR.
FADE
Put
down
the knife, honey.
TYLER
But,
Mommy-
DR.
FADE
Do
it!
Tyler
obeys,
reluctantly. Dr. Fade picks up the knife and tucks it
into her belt.
INT
KITCHEN - DAY
Dr.
Fade puts the knife
on the countertop. Again, we see her from
Tyler's POV.
DR.
FADE
You could have hurt
yourself, honey. From now on, you let me
protect you.
Understand?
INT
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Tyler
looks at the
living room window.
DR. FADE (O.C.)
They just keep putting
stuff on the fence -- which is technically my
property, but I don't have the heart to try and stop
them…
INT
LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Same
as above, but now
the window has been forced open. Tyler turns to
see his mother, in the kitchen, apparently fighting with a taller,
black-clad
figure. When we hear their voices, they are not in sync with the
action--
DR.
FADE
GET OUT! GET OUT RIGHT
NOW OR I'M CALLING THE POLICE!
BLACK-CLAD WOMAN
LOOK! LOOK AT WHAT
YOU'RE DOING!
It
appears that the
black-clad woman is trying to shove some
photographs in Dr. Fade's face. The doctor pushes the woman
backward, and her
elbow knocks the knife off the kitchen counter. The black-clad woman
pushes
back, and Dr. Fade lands on her behind. Her head hits something -- the
cupboard
or refrigerator -- and she is momentarily dazed. The pictures scatter
over the
kitchen floor.
TYLER
YOU
LEAVE MY MOMMY ALONE!
Suddenly,
the
black-clad woman is looking down at Tyler. From where
she is standing, she is nearly silhouetted by the kitchen light. She is
also
wearing black pantyhose over her head, so that her face cannot be seen.
From
his POV, she's just this giant faceless dark shape looming
over him.
Meanwhile,
Tyler is
holding the knife again. She steps forward, he rushes forward…
and
suddenly the WHOLE SCREEN GOES RED.
INT
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Tyler
looks at his
mother in the kitchen.
DR.
FADE
And
maybe they're just scared of him…
SERIES
OF DISJOINTED
FLASHBACK IMAGES:
- The
black-clad woman
collapses on the floor.
- Dr.
Fade recovers,
sees Tyler.
DR. FADE (O.C., distant
and echoey)
Tyler! Tyler, honey,
are you all right?
-
Again, we see the
expanding pool of blood cover the photos on the
floor.
-
Tyler's
blood-covered fingers press 9-1-1 on the phone.
- Dr.
Fade has taken
off her belt, wrapped it around the woman's upper
thigh, stuck the handle of a ladle under it, and is now turning the
ladle,
using the belt as a tourniquet in an attempt to stop the bleeding.
Tyler is
holding the phone up to her.
DR. FADE (O.C., distant
and echoey)
I think it's
her femoral artery -- there's so much blood… no,
I can't
see her face -- Tyler, honey, take her mask off…
Tyler
pulls her mask
off, revealing the beautiful, horrified young
woman we've been seeing so much of.
-
Police cars and
ambulances are seen parked on the street through the
living room windows.
- The black-clad woman is surrounded by
paramedics.
One of them shakes his head sadly.
- A
black body bag is
zipped shut. We see her eye staring sightlessly
out before it closes over her.
INT
LIVING ROOM - DAY
Tyler
makes a beeline
for the front door.
EXT
TYLER'S
HOUSE - DAY
CLOSEUP
on the front
door as it opens. Tyler comes running out, a
certain pair of long legs in black denim right behind him.
CUT
TO
Tyler's POV as he runs down the path, out the gate, turns
right, and immediately has to put on the brakes to keep from running
smack into
a black-clad woman crouching by the fence.
But
this is not the
woman. This is a different woman, in her
fifties. She is placing flowers beneath a poster that has "R.I.P. BROOK
LAURENTIDE" written across the top and a number of pictures
of Brook at various
stages of her life. The
center is dominated by a picture of
her in her prom dress, looking radiant.
There
is a very long
pause as Tyler and this new woman size each other
up. Tyler looks at one of the photos on the poster, which shows a
ten-year-old
Brook and a somewhat younger version of this woman on some happy
occasion. The
family resemblance is unmistakable. Suddenly Tyler realizes, to his
horror, who
this must be.
Meanwhile,
she,
standing up and glancing from Tyler to the front door
and back again, comes to a realization of her own. The pause grows
longer and
more awkward second by second, until Tyler breaks the ice.
TYLER
You know who I am,
don't you?
(MRS.
LAURENTIDE nods
grimly. There is a pause, not quite as long as
the first.)
You must be really mad
at me.
MRS. LAURENTIDE
The truth
is… I don't really know how to feel about you.
(pause)
It would be one thing
if you were… a serial killer… or a thief or a
rapist… or a jealous boyfriend… or even a drunk
driver.
(pause)
My husband thinks
you're some kind of child psychopath… that
you're
the sort of person who can't ever feel sad or sorry, no
matter what you do.
(pause)
I think if you were,
we'd both be happier.
TYLER
She was gonna
hurt my mom.
MRS. LAURENTIDE
I don't
believe that.
TYLER
It's true!
MRS. LAURENTIDE
I didn't say
it wasn't true -- I said I didn't believe it.
(pause,
looking at the fence)
There's a lot of things right
now that I can't
believe, even though I know they're true…
(pause)
I think I must still be
in denial -- somebody gave me a book on stages
of mourning…
(pause)
I know how this is
going to sound, but I keep feeling like… like this
is just a phase she's going through -- like her Goth phase
and her
peace-and-love phase and her Ayn-Rand-objectionivarian-whatever phase
that
lasted maybe two weeks in high school…
(pause)
As if all I have to do
is be patient and get through this, and before
I know it I'll hear her car pulling up in the driveway, and
there she'll be
with a new hairstyle and a new T-shirt and a new pet cause that
everybody in
the world has to drop everything and listen to her about, and
she'll have
completely forgotten… all of this…
(pause)
You have no idea what
I'm talking about, do you? I'm sorry, but
I've
got to talk to somebody, and my husband just wants to go on and on
about all
the people he's going to sue and all the…
so-and-sos… who are going to pay for
this, and I'd rather talk to you than that damn grief
counselor…
(pause)
And I'm not crazy,
I know
she's…
I know there's no way to stop being dead and move on to
something
else, but what I know and what I feel are two different
things…
TYLER
Is
there
a way to stop being a killer?
MRS. LAURENTIDE
I don't know.
(pause)
I know
that's not what I should say. I should come up with
something
like "Shut your eyes and count to a hundred while patting
your head and rubbing
your tummy, and then…" but you'd know
I was just making it up, wouldn't you?
(TYLER
nods.)
I still say she
wouldn't have hurt anyone. All the changes she put
herself through, the one thing she never did was hurt
anybody… but then… up
until that day, you had never hurt anybody either, had you?
(TYLER
shakes his head.)
That's what
scares me. I can't imagine her hurting anybody,
but… how
do I know what could have happened?
(pause)
Sometimes I ask myself
if it would be any easier if… she were in jail
and someone else's picture were on this fence…
and… I just don't know.
(pause)
I'd better
go.
She
walks off. Tyler
makes no attempt to follow her. Instead, he turns
to go back inside.
Halfway
down the path
to his front door, he finds Brook blocking his
way. He forces himself to look her in the face.
TYLER
You're
not gonna
go away, are you?
She
does not respond in
any way.
TYLER
Okay,
then.
He
shuts his eyes,
grits his teeth… and extends his right hand
forwards and upwards. Her hand encloses it… but it is no
longer gloved, and
there is no sign of the black sweater.
Tyler
opens his eyes.
Brook is still standing there, but now she is in
her prom dress, smiling affectionately down on him. He smiles back. She
musses
his hair playfully.
He
continues on his way
into his house, her hand on his shoulder. For
just a second, a black glove and sleeve flicker into being on her bare
hand and
arm.